Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Day 31

English 101 Fall 2010 Day 31
1. Peer Review Review
2. Sample Thesis statements/Introductions
Think of it as similar to your Smoke Signals thesis, but instead of three steps (Separation, Initiation and Return) there are the 8 steps of the Hero's Journey to walk the reader through.

3. Your thesis statements
4. Body paragraphs—Topic sentences.
5. Tomorrow, lab time.


EmilyMurphy said...

Going over thesis statements helped me a lot because i was confused on what they were supposed to look like, and now i can edit mine and make it much better.

bryan said...

today was nice. I received some interesting input on my essay/thesis. Hopefully i can transfer what i learned into my paper. :P we'll see about that. haha

Monica said...

I enjoyed having the class look at my thesis statment to help me get a better grasp on what it should sound like.

Frank said...

Thank you Mr. Peters for your input, I hope it is better and acceptable

Sheryl Miller said...

I keep editing my paper, it barely looks like it did originally. Yay! lol