Wednesday, August 4, 2010

Day 24

English 101 Summer 2010 Day 24

Meet in the lab tomorrow. Work on essays and stories.

Complete peer review.

Peer review review.

Structure—Hero's Journey Plot Log.

Revision tips and techniques. (powerpoint)

Sample essays

Smoke Signals—Kari, Layla

TKAM—Jim, Anna, David


Belinda said...

May I say that some of my classmates are heading down the wrong career path . . . cuz I could sit and read your GREAT works of art all day long and I'm no reader. Your writing techniques and the images that pop in my head as I read motivate me to read more, but only interesting essays such as yours.
Thank Englinsh 101 Classmates

Lissy said...

Peer reviews help me see what I have left out, what am not picturing to the reader. It was very helpful to say that I needed to add dialogue about a confrontation with a co-worker. Thank you Lyla.

*Gabby* said...

Thanks for answering all my questions Mr peters on the dialogue.. It really helped me out.