Wednesday, October 31, 2007
Yakima Dust Bowl Stories
The website is notoriously bad, but the videos might give you an opportunity to write their stories for essay two option.
Day 27
English 101 Day 27
- Quiz GoW 13-20—Use SID
- Illustrated GoW
- Chapter 16:
- 161-172
- 173-182
- 183-192
- 161-172
- Chapter 17
- Chapter 18
- 201-210;
- 211-221;
- 221-230
- 201-210;
- Chapter 19
H/W: Chapter 22
Tuesday, October 30, 2007
All we got...
All we got is the family unbroken. Like a bunch of cows, when the lobos are ranging stick all together.
--Ma Joad
Day 26
English 101 Day 26
Also from Yesterday's paper
- Chapter 15 + Youtube= Liberty Mutual Insurance?
- Illustrated GoW
- Count by 8's
- For each group
- (1-3) panels with an image, a quote and a title.
- Chapter 16:
- 163-172
- 173-182
- 183-192
- 163-172
- Chapter 17
- Chapter 18
- 201-210;
- 211-221;
- 221-230
- 201-210;
- Chapter 19
- H/W: Finish 20 + Chapter 21
Quiz Wed 12-21
Monday, October 29, 2007
Steinbeck’s Bulletin Board
John Steinbeck's Bulletin Board
An army of principles can penetrate where an army of soldiers cannot.
Thomas Paine
I love the man that can smile in trouble, that can gather strength from distress, and grow brave by reflection. 'Tis the business of little minds to shrink, but he whose heart is firm, and whose conscience approves his conduct, will pursue his principles unto death.
Thomas Paine
The World is my country, all mankind are my brethren, and to do good is my religion.
Thomas Paine
We have it in our power to begin the world over again.
Thomas Paine
Human nature is not of itself vicious.
Thomas Paine
If there must be trouble, let it be in my day, that my child may have peace.
Thomas Paine
If we do not hang together, we shall surely hang separately.
Thomas Paine
My mind is my own church.
Thomas Paine
These are the times that try men's souls.
Thomas Paine
The real man smiles in trouble, gathers strength from distress, and grows brave by reflection.
Thomas Paine
What we obtain too cheap, we esteem too lightly; it is dearness only that gives everything its value.
Thomas Paine
It is not a field of a few acres of ground, but a cause, that we are defending, and whether we defeat the enemy in one battle, or by degrees, the consequences will be the same.
Thomas Paine
I believe that banking institutions are more dangerous to our liberties than standing armies. Already they have raised up a monied aristocracy that has set the government at defiance. The issuing power should be taken from the banks and restored to the people to whom it properly belongs.
Thomas Jefferson
Every generation needs a new revolution.
Thomas Jefferson
I believe that every human mind feels pleasure in doing good to another.
Thomas Jefferson
Do you want to know who you are? Don't ask. Act! Action will delineate and define you.
Thomas Jefferson
Every government degenerates when trusted to the rulers of the people alone. The people themselves are its only safe depositories.
Thomas Jefferson
Experience demands that man is the only animal which devours his own kind, for I can apply no milder term to the general prey of the rich on the poor.
Thomas Jefferson
It is neither wealth nor splendor; but tranquility and occupation which give you happiness.
Thomas Jefferson
Leave no authority existing not responsible to the people.
Thomas Jefferson
Our country is now taking so steady a course as to show by what road it will pass to destruction, to wit: by consolidation of power first, and then corruption, its necessary consequence.
Thomas Jefferson
Merchants have no country. The mere spot they stand on does not constitute so strong an attachment as that from which they draw their gains.
Thomas Jefferson
No occupation is so delightful to me as the culture of the earth, and no culture comparable to that of the garden.
Thomas Jefferson
Capital is dead labor, which, vampire-like, lives only by sucking living labor, and lives the more, the more labor it sucks.
Karl Marx
Capitalist production, therefore, develops technology, and the combining together of various processes into a social whole, only by sapping the original sources of all wealth - the soil and the labourer.
Karl Marx
Capital is reckless of the health or length of life of the laborer, unless under compulsion from society.
Karl Marx
Machines were, it may be said, the weapon employed by the capitalists to quell the revolt of specialized labor.
Karl Marx
Landlords, like all other men, love to reap where they never sowed.
Karl Marx
The more the division of labor and the application of machinery extend, the more does competition extend among the workers, the more do their wages shrink together.
Karl Marx
From each according to his abilities, to each according to his needs.
Karl Marx
The history of all previous societies has been the history of class struggles.
Karl Marx
Workers of the world unite; you have nothing to lose but your chains.
Karl Marx
The rich will do anything for the poor but get off their backs.
Karl Marx
Without doubt, machinery has greatly increased the number of well-to-do idlers.
Karl Marx
Friday, October 26, 2007
Day 24
English 101 Day 24
- Sunday's paper
- Egan last night
- Getting Essays Back
- Prewriting, Essay 2 Experience continued
- Take one of the journey's listed yesterday and freewrite for five minutes on the details you remember.
- Prewriting Essay 2 Observation
- How did your family come to the Yakima Valley?
- Who? What? Where? When? Why? How?
- Steinbeck's bulletin board:
7. What happens in Ch. 15? What is the main idea of this chapter? How is this chapter a "microcosm" of the whole book? We may need to continue this conversation next week.
H/W: Finish Chapter 16, 17, 18, 19
Thursday, October 25, 2007
Day 23
English 101 Day 23
Essays back Thursday/Friday (1130—I owe you doughnuts and you'll go first next round)
Six Groups
Each group: A passage to read aloud—pick parts if you have them.
An essay question to ask the class about the passage.
8—Meet the Joads 67-74; 75-80; 81-85
10—Leaving the Land 90-97; 98-105; 106-114
Prewriting, Essay 2
Journeys: Listing
Places you've lived
Road trips
Moves
Metaphoric? (illness, recovery, divorce, loss, pregnancy, childcaring)
Freewrite on one of them.
Chapter 14: Read aloud
Paine, Marx, Jefferson—Briefly
Then, find a quote that Steinbeck would like.
H/W: Read Chapter 16 to bottom of 177 (I work for the boss)
Tim Egan 7-8 Seasons tonight
Wednesday, October 24, 2007
Day 22
English 101 Day 22
Essays back Thursday/Friday (1130—I owe you doughnuts and you'll go first next round)
Getting papers back (1030)
Quiz back
Six Groups
Each group: A passage to read aloud—pick parts if you have them.
An essay question to ask the class about the passage.
8—Meet the Joads 67-74; 75-80; 81-85
10—Leaving the Land 90-97; 98-105; 106-114
Prewriting, Essay 2
List journeys you've taken.
Places you've lived
Road trips
Moves
Metaphoric? (illness, recovery, divorce, loss)
Freewrite on one of them.
H/W: Read Chapter 14-15
Reed says 14 is THE BIG CHAPTER
I say 15 is A BIGGER CHAPTER
Tim Egan 7-8 Season on Thursday
Tuesday, October 23, 2007
Essay 2 Assignment
English 101 Fall 2007
Essay 2: Departure, Journey and Arrival
In a 3-6 page story, follow a third-person narrator's migration from the departure, through the journey, to the arrival.
Rough Draft Due: Wednesday November 7th
Bring 4 copies.
This will be graded for completion, not quality.
However, it's worth 20 points and part of your 60% grade.
Final Draft Due: Tuesday November 12th.
Bring two copies.
100 points, graded using a modified rubric. Also part of your 60% grade.
Double spaced. 12 point font. MLA paper format.
The story should convey a theme, or main idea, to the reader.
The details of the story, events as well as descriptions, will support this main idea.
Your primary sources for the ideas and details will be experience, observation and imagination.
Like a traditional thesis, your theme will be clear to the reader upon completion of the story.
Unlike a traditional thesis, your main point, or theme, may be either implied or stated directly.
Your organization using the following "Chapter" titles:
- Departure: Why leave? What is the motivation? What do you take? What is left behind?
- The Journey: What challenges are overcome? What skills are acquired? What dragons faced? What is the low point?
- Arrival: How does the trip change the way you see things? What lessons are learned? How do you bring the lessons to your new place? Are you accepted in the new place?
We also want to work on Setting, Characterization, Conflict, Exposition, Rising Action, Climax, Falling Action, Resolution.
Tips: Limit number of characters; limit time period; limit settings. I'd suggest AT MOST one setting for each section, anywhere from an hour to a day for the time period and 2-5 characters TOTAL for the essay. Any more and we'll get lost.
Also, focus on TELLING DETAILS. The more specific the better. Instead of blue car, try 1971 midnight blue Plymouth Valiant he inherited from his grandmother.
Also, DRAMA= CONFLICT (No tears for the writer, no tears for the reader. No joy for the writer, no joy for the reader)
Finally, there are the facts and then there's the truth.
Day 21
English 101 Day 21
Your essays will be back Tuesday/Wednesday (1030)
and Thursday/Friday (1130—I owe you doughnuts and you'll go first next round)
Quiz Ch 1-11 (20 points) SID only
Essay 2 Assigned
Six Groups
Each group: A passage to read aloud—pick parts if you have them.
An essay question to ask the class about the passage.
8—Meet the Joads 67-74; 75-80; 81-85
10—Leaving the Land 90-97; 98-105; 106-114
Some of this conversation will be continued Wednesday
H/W: Read Chapter 13
Tim Egan 7-8 Season on Thursday
Monday, October 22, 2007
Day 20
English 101 Day 20
NYTimes: A little late, but for revision? Either way, worth reading.
Your essays will be back Tuesday/Wednesday (1030)
and Thursday/Friday (1130—I owe you doughnuts and you'll go first next round)
Getting papers back—for 930
From last week:
Setting Characterization Exposition
Themes: One Big Soul, Unity in Family (Nuclear and of Man), Big guy v. Little Guy, Agrarianism, The evils of Capitalism
Ch. 7—Car salesman
Ch. 8—Meet the Joads 67-74; 75-80; 81-85
Ch. 9—Selling your life
Ch. 10—Leaving the Land 90-97; 98-105; 106-114
In Six Groups
Each group:
A passage to read aloud—pick parts if you have them.
An essay question to ask the class about the passage.
Some of this conversation will be continued Tuesday.
H/W: Read Chapter 11 and 12
Quiz Ch. 1-11 Tuesday
Friday, October 19, 2007
Day 19
English 101 Day 19
From Yesterday:
Setting Diner:
- Lonely, Greasy Spoon, Truckers, meeting place
Jim Casey Characterization
- Reborn, Doubter/Seeker, Honest, Man of Thought, Philosopher—Oversoul, Holy Spirit is One Human Spirit
- Togetherness and cooperation over practicality
- Why isn't this Christian? What parts might be?
- Chapter 5: How Do You Shoot the Monster?
- Yakima Pallet and Bin and the tape measures
- Tenant farmers
- Tractor driver muzzled and goggled by…
- Who is taking it?
- Why?
- What happens to the small farmer once it's gone
- Jefferson Agrarianism
- Find examples of this in GoW
- Jefferson Agrarianism
- Yakima Pallet and Bin and the tape measures
- Chapter 6 Notes:
- What Muley tells them
- What Casey tells Muley
- What Tom thinks about unity
- What Muley tells them
H/W Read 7, 8, 9 and 10 (Quiz on first 11 Tuesday)
Thursday, October 18, 2007
The Transparent Eye-Ball

Day 18
English 101 Day 18
Setting for chapter 1:
Hot+red+hazy+dry+shut tight+dying plant+no rain+pale++++ = Hell
First Impression of Tom Joad:
New cheap clothes + smokes + drinks + swears + manipulative + smart + insightful + aggressive+young/old+calloused hands+bug crushing+solitary+loner+homicide+straight talker = Badass
Setting Diner:
Time
- Year
- Season
- Month
- Day of Week
- Time of Day
- General Era
- Year
Place (physical environment)
- Country
- State
- City
- Landscape
- Climate
- House
- Yard/Surroundings
- Country
Jim Casey Characterization
(1) showing the character's appearance,
(2) displaying the character's actions,
(3) revealing the character's thoughts,
(4) letting the character speak, and
(5) getting the reactions of others
(6) their names
Chapter 3: The Turtle
- The Setting? What's the turtle's world like?
- Characteristics of the Turtle
- Symbolic in every sentence
- The Setting? What's the turtle's world like?
- Chapter 4 Notes: Tom Meets Casey
- Character
- Jim Casey
- Reborn, Doubter/Seeker, Honest, Man of Thought, Philosopher—Oversoul, Holy Spirit is One Human Spirit
- Togetherness and cooperation over practicality
- Is this Christianity? Is part of it Christianity?
- What can we add to the picture of Tom?
- Reborn, Doubter/Seeker, Honest, Man of Thought, Philosopher—Oversoul, Holy Spirit is One Human Spirit
- Chapter 5: The Monster
- Yakima Pallet and Bin and the tape measures
- Any fruit packing line, mill, etc
- Any fruit packing line, mill, etc
- Tenant farmers
- Tractor driver muzzled and goggled by…
- Who is taking it?
- Why?
- What happens to the small farmer once it's gone
- Farmers are the backbone of the country because of the connection to the land.
- Dignity, self-respect, humility, life come from the land and the cycles we are connected to.
Wednesday, October 17, 2007
Day 17
English 101 Day 17
- BP Living Care 230-330 and Faculty Lecture 730-900
Setting:
- Time
- Year
- Season
- Month
- Day of Week
- Time of Day
- General Era
- Year
- Place (physical environment)
- Country
- State
- City
- Landscape
- Climate
- House
- Yard/Surroundings
- Country
Characterization is the method used by a writer to develop a character. The method includes
(1) showing the character's appearance,
(2) displaying the character's actions,
(3) revealing the character's thoughts,
(4) letting the character speak, and
(5) getting the reactions of others
(6) their names
- Chapter 1: Setting
- Chapter 2: Character of Tom Joad + Setting
- Chapter 3:??
- Chapter 4: Character of Jim Casey + Tom Joad
- Homework GoW Ch 5
Tuesday, October 16, 2007
Day 16
English 101 Lesson Plan Day 16
This week BP
Selah Tues 7-8
Wed:
Living Care 230-330
Faculty Lecture 730-900
IL
Tues 210 Information Sources
Thurs 730 Web Evaluation
Oral reading—Intro to Thesis and Conclusion
Y= +5; N= -5
El Abrecamino
"Those who make a way where there is no way. Abre means to open. Camino means way. An abrecamino is one who opens the way. One who opens one way opens many ways."
Who do you know who is an abrecamino? Who made the way for you?
How are you an abrecamino? Who are you making a way for?
Audio GoW Big Read?
Reader's Guide H/O
H/W: GoW 3 & 4
Monday, October 15, 2007
Day 15
English 102 Lesson Plan Day 15
This week BP
Selah Tues 7-8
Living Care 230-330
Faculty Lecture 730-900
IL
Tues 730 Proquest; 210 Information Sources
Thurs 730 Web Evaluation
Feedback from Peer Editing
Over all, helpful.
Be harder readers.
Take them home?
More anonymous?
More/Less worksheet work?
H/I "Final" Draft of Essays
Y/N oral reading?—Intro to Thesis and Conclusion
Y= +5; N= -5
Essays returned in about a week. Asking for them before next Monday makes me go slower and put your essay on the bottom of the pile.
You passed your first big hurdle. Good job.
Reading schedule GoW
This will be the biggest challenge of the quarter in 101.
But it will be fun, too, with the right approach.
H/W: GoW 1&2
Friday, October 12, 2007
Works Cited
The works cited list should appear at the end of your essay. It provides the information necessary for a reader to locate and be able to read any sources you cite in the essay. Each source you cite in the essay must appear in your works-cited list; likewise, each entry in the works-cited list must be cited in your text. Preparing your works cited list using MLA style is covered in chapter six of the MLA Style Manual, and chapter four of the Handbook for Writing Research Papers. Here are some guidelines for preparing your works cited list.
Begin your works cited list on a separate page from the text of the essay under the label Works Cited (with no quotation marks, underlining, etc.), which should be centered at the top of the page.
Make the first line of each entry in your list flush left with the margin. Subsequent lines in each entry should be indented one-half inch. This is known as a hanging indent.
Double space all entries, with no skipped spaces between entries.
Keep in mind that underlining and italics are equivalent; you should select one or the other to use throughout your essay.
Alphabetize the list of works cited by the first word in each entry (usually the author's last name),
Basic Rules for Citations
Authors' names are inverted (last name first); if a work has more than one author, invert only the first author's name, follow it with a comma, then continue listing the rest of the authors.
If you have cited more than one work by a particular author, order them alphabetically by title, and use three hyphens in place of the author's name for every entry after the first.
If no author is given for a particular work, alphabetize by the title of the piece and use a shortened version of the title for parenthetical citations.
Capitalize each word in the titles of articles, books, etc. This rule does not apply to articles, short prepositions, or conjunctions unless one is the first word of the title or subtitle.
Underline or italicize titles of books, journals, magazines, newspapers, and films.
Use quotation marks around the titles of articles in journals, magazines, and newspapers. Also use quotation marks for the titles of short stories, book chapters, poems, and songs.
List page numbers efficiently, when needed. If you refer to a journal article that appeared on pages 225 through 250, list the page numbers on your Works Cited page as 225-50.
If you're citing an article or a publication that was originally issued in print form but that you retrieved from an online database, you should provide enough information so that the reader can locate the article either in its original print form or retrieve it from the online database (if they have access). For more about this, see our discussion of electronic sources.
Books
Author(s). Title of Book. Place of Publication: Publisher, Year of Publication.
Book with one author
Henley, Patricia. The Hummingbird House. Denver: MacMurray, 1999